Beautiful fall days
Reminiscent of the dance decades ago
Promises made but then betrayed
Confidant we’d be together forever
Until, l I caught them kissing
On our special Halloween night
He suspected nothing when I’d invited him over
He still resides alone, in my basement
Written for Melissa’s Fandango Flash Fiction Challenge. Image credit: Artur Tumasjan on Unsplash.
Also written for d’Verse’s Quadrille challenge . The challenge was to write a poem of 44 words (excluding the title), and it can take any form. This week’s challenge was to use the word “fall” in a Quadrille.
That’s a killer last line!😅 Love how you smoothly blended fall right in.❤️🍂
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Thank you
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Ouch!
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😆
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How are you doing dear friend?
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Pretty good. Lot’s of fatigue. But overall, I am OK.
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That is good news. Take care of yourself Lauren
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Thanks Sadje, I’m trying.
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Hugs!
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Love it 💜💜
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Thanks Willow
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wonderful
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Thanks Beth
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It sounds like he should be glad to at least have a basement left.
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Exactly
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Cool, Lauren!
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Thanks
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You’re welcome.
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LOL!!
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A killer of a Halloween poem! 🙂
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Thanks
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Love it! “He still resides alone, in my basement” Too funny.
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Thanks Ally
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Good to see a post from you Lauren. This is great!
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Thank you Di.
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Gorgeously rendered!
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Thank you
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Nice post ✉️
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