The prompt poem from last week:
‘Work in Progress’ by Sarah David
Family: work in progress. Like tree branches arching, you will grow: the forks you choose for each limb unknown until you reach the intersecting valleys, relying on gentle hands and histories. Father’s journey: tapestry of mysteries; Mother’s stories: secreted into galleries. All life’s answers unneeded to go. Love, dirt, and time; our truth will follow. Family: work in progress.
Sarah’s prompt guidelines
12 lines or shorter; Includes a contrast in images or ideas.
My friends had a mom and dad
I had a mom, a bio-dad, and stepdad numbers 1 – 7
My friends had family vacations
I had some Sunday afternoon drives
My friends kids had the latest trendy outfits
I made my kids’ clothes
My friends flew their kids to vacations
I took my kids to parks and libraries
My friends acquiesced to their spouses policies
I made decisions for myself
My friends lived the lives they grew up with
I’ve lived a totally different experience
Written for the Skeptic’s Kaddish W3-7.
I love how you’ve overcome so much Lauren
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Thank you Sadje.
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You’re most welcome
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Fantastic – and that third stanza really packs a punch, Lauren! ❤
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Thanks David
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I love your take on the contrast! Your poem tells a powerful story.
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Thank you.
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Lauren, the most recent W3, hosted by Kunjal, is now live!
much love,
David
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Thanks David
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Lauren, this week’s W3 is now live ~ we’d love to have you join in!
Much love,
David
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and your probably all the better for it! 🙂 xoxo
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